I get the ideas of your writing. However some paragraph needs an explicit time transition, or a conjunction. Please re-read your text, read it in Indonesia. If you think that the phrases already in logical sequence, please come find/contact me so we can discuss it together.
I get the ideas of your writing. However some paragraph needs an explicit time transition, or a conjunction. Please re-read your text, read it in Indonesia. If you think that the phrases already in logical sequence, please come find/contact me so we can discuss it together.
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